January 19 – 25

This week, I experimented with more finalized visuals, focusing on colour and overall mood for the film.

I also took time developing the Hare’s backstory, even though I do not plan for this to be in the film. This has helped me understand the Hare’s conditions and visuals.

The Hare finds an alien goo-like substance on a train track. When it inspects the entity, the goo latches onto the Hare’s face and forces its way into the Hare’s mouth. The goo acts as a sort of parasite, corrupting and eating away at its host. The goo hopes to find more natural material to infect by killing and accelerating the Hare’s decay.


I am still developing the visuals for the gardener’s house. I’ve detailed a floorplans and different angles of the house so that it is easier to make consistent in the background. I would like to make a more detailed rendering of all angles of the house that will be needed for the different shots.


MAIN CHARACTERThe protagonist.The gardener.
SECOND CHARACTERUsually, the antagonist.An unnatural parasite that infects the hare. This parasite represents a human’s unrelenting greed and corruption, an ugly desire that destroys everything in its path.
PROBLEMThe issue the main character confronts.The gardener discovered a dead hare in her garden.
FORCESObstacles or conditions that the main character should overcome to reach their target.The disease that has infected the hare seeps into the garden’s soil, affecting the life around it.
OBJECTIVE/TARGETThe Character’s goal.
The gardener wants to care for her garden.
WANTThe character’s wish or desire.She wishes for a peaceful life. The gardener has carved out a solitary life, just her and her garden. She cares for her plants and aids the lives of many critters.
NEEDWhat the character requires on a deeper level (the lesson they need to learn).Though no fault of the gardener, the hare has become enveloped by this parasitic goop that wishes to infect all it can. The gardener has made it her sole purpose to support life through her garden, only for it to be ripped away by another’s carelessness and greed.
OTHER CHARACTERSList of all characters involved in the story.The hare.
SETTING Where it happens.The Gardener’s house. She lives in a fairly rural area surrounded by forest and plenty of wildlife.
PEROIDThe time in history it happens.Present day.
TIMESPANThe duration of the events that make up the story.1 day.
TRAJECTORY The path along which the character will travel.The gardener deals with and mourns the loss of life. Even if not personally connected to the lives, all life is incredibly sacred to the gardener.
MAIN THEME The core concept of the story.The spread of rot and ease of destruction.
THESIS The message of the story.
The moral.
The horrors of being the victim of someone else’s poor judgment.
OTHER THEMESList of all themes in the story. Cause and effect, the spread and consequences of greed, selfishness and carelessness towards one’s surroundings, the unrelenting spread of rot and decay.
PLOTThe cause-and-effect Storyline.An infected hare causes the death of a garden, and quickly all the life that surrounds it.
STRUCTUREThe type of formula used for the development of the plot.Set up a confrontation. Resolution unknown / for interpretation.
LOGLINEA one or two sentence description of your story. A gardener discovers a diseased hare in their garden whose death is a mystery and seemingly entirely unnatural. The gardener removes the creature, but not before the rot has spread
GENREUnder which stylistic category this story falls.Horror – a mix of pretty visuals and unsettling action. Jarring and weird.
TARGET AUDIENCEWho are you telling this story to? Teens / young adults. Enjoyers of horror.
POINT OF VIEW Who is narrating this story? From the gardener’s perspective.